Interesting turn of events, will he now be able to see his future as well? I like how you portrayed his childhood memories; very well done.

Very trippy, with a slight sense of foreboding for me at the end there. I mean, when else do you see your whole life flash before your eyes? Did you mean to use a lot of run-on sentences? That first paragraph in particular. I could sort of see doing that to get across the speed of it all, but just wondering.

I like this a lot, though I have the same question as THX , about the run-on sentences being accidental or not. If you _did_intend them, try putting ellipses in between them or something to help even out the pacing. Otherwise, it feels a bit stunted.

I did kind of intend it, but I have got rid of most of them and it’s probably better without them. It was an attempt to get the flashing of the images across but it didn’t really work.

Is it just me who gets the first line of the 2nd paragraph looking really weird and running of the page? I hope so, otherwise no one will be able to read it. If it isn’t just me does anyone have any idea why that might be happening? It’s in a different font and everything!

I see it, too. Did you write this in a Microsoft Word document and then copy and paste it? I’ve done that and this has happened before. Try going into edit mode and retyping it to see if it helps.

I also see it. Had to copy/paste to read the whole thing. Very trippy trip here. Interested to see where this goes as I had the same thoughts as THX about this foreshadowing his death.
Also, I think your second word should be “image” instead of “imagine.”

Great concept and yeah I see that strange text as well. Maybe if you retype it it might go away…

Listening to Coldplay on the internet today, I came across their song, “Life in Technicolor.” Did it influence the title to this perchance? ;-)

No it didn’t! I don’t like Coldplay, although I think Chris Martin’s probably quite a nice and funny bloke. I saw a play few years ago called My Life in Theatre (starring Patrick Stewart and Joshua Jackson) and that was the influence.