She did explode. Wow. Crazy that she goes nuts on everyone except him. I guess that was to be expected, though. I liked how this story was told in an untraditional way, not as it happens but from word of mouth. This colors the story differently, somehow.
Great job on the story. Still didn’t see what could be taken out of context though. I really thought there would be a line in there like “and I got right behind him and jammed it in. You should have seen his face.” You know, something like that. Still, this was fun, and as Ana said, the way it was presented really worked well.
♠Ana Cristina♥
John Perkins
Freedom