Ha ha. Awesome twist man. I loved so many of the descriptions. “The metallic taste of irony,” is probably my favorite.
Thank you for entering.
PS, I really hope this isn’t autobiographical. =P

No, it’s not autobiographical. Just something that happened this weekend, that made me think how it probably goes in some marriages.

The ending blindsided me completely, made me laugh and I didn’t see it coming at all. Great fight scene descriptions all over.

Yikes, that ending was definitely a surprise. I did not see it coming in the slightest. Great job!

Wow. I didn’t laugh… but it may be a while before my eyes go back to their original shape. ;o Wonderful job!

wow I was thinking two guys. Cool twist ending, action packed.

Very well executed twist ending. I was delighted to realize at the end, with a smile, that I didn’t have the twist figured out after all. And great descriptions as well, by the way.

did you publish a novel called what to wear when meeting a kennedy?, i knew it, you are my exwife, your cruelty reveals everything, i pawned your ring by the way to pay my for my dental work. just teasing unless you are her.

WOW . Sounds like something I’d do if I wanted a divorce. I’m violent enough with my friends when they do something stupid(Kitty Pom-Pom knows that) if my husband was that kind of idiot I’d end up doing that.

Really cool twist. That was most unexpected.

[still giggling]

LoA