Welcome back.
I like this. Back to your sci-fi roots I see. However, I do think this should have ended with “it’s definitely not going to be a good morning.”
I’m getting a very “Demolition Man” vibe from this car.

LOL John, it’s definitely not going to be a good morning… that was actually what I had planned on doing but I went another direction. PS, see sequel for that line. :)

Ooh, I like :) Write more, faster.

I’m starting to get into sci-fi because of this here website. Huh. Who would’ve thunk?
Good writing, KevMullins. Off to read the sequel now…

Thanks Ana, glad that you are enjoying the story. Sci-Fi has been the great love of my life in every form of media and I agree FicLets is a great place to read excellent Sci-Fi.
Most of the stuff on here rivals any of the Sci-Fi books I’ve read in ages.

Awesome. I love how you ended it and left me wanting more. I look forward to another tremendous series from you!