See, that’s what we call getting ‘target locked’. Tunnel vision is very bad, in driving, love, and assassination attempts.

I liked it, but I didn’t really understand the ending… maybe because I’m exhausted, but you might have to spell it out for me, watween…

This made me laugh. I love the twist. Very unexpected.
Thank you very much for entering.

hey i dug it was it ficlet nirvana

I totally don’t get this…

I’m sorry

I liked the idea. I thought that the telling of it was a bit rough, you might want to change the last paragraph to be a bit more obvious.

It looks like you got stuck on that 1024 char limit.

Well done, nevertheless.

LoA