Another damn good entry. I was hoping these two would scrap, and so far it seems to be living up to expectations.

Heh, yeah. I’ve been waiting to get these two in a fight. This was a hard piece to get into nirvana…I was WAY too descriptive in Benny’s attack, and really had to trim the heck out of it, without losing any of the straight-forward brutality of Benny’s style. I still see some awkward wording I need to go back and fix, but I’ll let it stand for now.

Excellent fight scene and great descriptions. You did a great job of painting a mental image with this one.

Awesome intro to a fight scene. Great line thrown at the secretary.

The action’s really picking up!