Well that certainly can’t be good. This was a great three piece set. Having the explosion take place from the pilot’s perspective worked really well, tying in all four of your main characters.
Pyro: Heh, you’re most probably very right, sir.<br />John: Thanks, I’m trying to figure out exactly where I’m going to tie in the police character I introduced a few entries back, but so far this is really shaping out well.
I have to say, you really got me with that last line! I didn’t see it coming and it was great! Looking forward to see where you go next… I’m really digging this story.
Whoops, forgot about that guy. He hasn’t been around very long though. So, I don’t feel too bad about forgetting him. I still think of these four as the main characters, even though Red hasn’t had a story from her perspective. I suppose your cop could get the call from the explosion, or maybe he’s on his way home from a shift, and happens to drive by?
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