Great job continuing the style and content. Great lines on the mem-chips and gynoid. Hilarious. One little slip into present tense compared to the rest being past tense.

Thanks THX . Fixed it.

Great continuation, Krulltar! This could be a fun series.

I’m going to agree with the two sages. Great continuation, and a good dose of humor.

Great! “Collision sensors” was a nice touch. There’s just something about imagining robots in a noir detective style.

I thought the dialogue was fantastic. Very nice sequel.