Not sure why, but I like the story. Good job making him come across as a bit pompous.

15 pounds?! Wow. I sense a sequel…

Great job with the whole dreamy feel and the split between narration, memory, and internal thought process. And then awesome turn taking it from just a thoughtful peace about death and passing to a story with some suspense and question with Joyce’s spitting. Very dramatic throughout.

Thank you guys. Dr. Woods was actually a real person (had a different name) … Joyce, too… Her story is rather depressing.