Excellent descriptive work, particularly the sense of high-class standards coupled with detachment. I’m thinking specifically of the fan paragraph. Good stuff!

Ooh, absolutely magical in the description and characterization of a well-guarded hope and affection. Really liked the whole putting the hair on the maid feeling creative.

wow.. this is one exquisite story! Its so rich in detail. Immediately it made me think of a Jane Austin novel or a scene from the movie Marie Antoinette. You truly have a way with words.

Thank you, Sarah! Wow, I can’t believe this made you think of Jane Austen and Marie Antoinette. That’s a high compliment!

I love how she gives the maid credit for being creative and acts as if she isn’t as ramped up as she is about the chance of seeing him.

Yay! I love these sequels…This is such a life like series, and I’m enjoyed it a lot. Yes! Just like Sarah M Conrad said : it reminds me of Pride and Prejudice. Keep up the awesome work!

I love the first paragraph. Great job.
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