Interesting dialogue and I’m liking the character names.

I agree with ana

I agree with Ana too! This is a great start! I can’t wait for a sequel!

I disagree with Ana because dissent is cool. Like smoking and Fonzie.
Fun dialog and interesting character names… Dammit!

Wow John, you are so weird. Lol. I agree with all the above. I really hope you sequel this, it’s a fantastic start! I, too, love the names. Jade is one of my all-time favorites.
One point: there is slight repetetivity in this phrase: debating wether or not I should sharpen it or not.
Just cut out one of these ‘or nots’ and that will clear that up.
LoA

very authentic conversation, nice descriptions of the setting and plot without giving too much away..
..in other words i’m gonna stop typing and read the sequel.
=]

Great start.. In fact..I had to back up to get to the beginning ficlet. Now that I am on the right track.. Here I go. :D

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And lol@John ;D