Nice imagery in this one, but the spelling and grammar mistakes are a bit distracting.

Awwww…..
That’s about the best I can describe this. Who cares if there are spelling and grammar mistakes? This has real feeling to it.

I agree with Ana.

In Watween’s words “Awwww…..” This is so sweet! I have the feeling that the grammar/spelling things were a result of sudden-onset-inspiration, and I feel it adds to the spur-of-the-moment thing I felt in this. Some of the best stuff is spur-of-the-moment, including this. Well done.