Cool and action packed,love the names.

I agree, the names are fantastic and help add to the otherworldly aspect you’ve got going here.

“Belken” was eventually killed in Afghanistan …

Great descriptions and a great, gritty feel to it all. The ending seemed a bit quick for some reason, though I can’t put my finger on it.

THX 0477
you’re right … maybe ‘cause I was running out of keystrokes…

To all: thanks for the comments!