It’s just like your standard zombie story until the end, when it’s revealed to be a dream. But I wonder why she keeps having these bad dreams? Hmm…

You gave away the twist in the title. I was a little disappointed. Your dialogue is solid though.

I read the title, but didn’t pay attention to its link to the plot twist. :/ Great job!

I think the title ruined the twist for me because it had me expecting some sort of dream. Like Ana, I’m wondering what’s the cause of the bad dreams.

I really like that this twist hints at the possibility of her nightmares coming true. Not sure how I feel about the twist being the fact that it’s a dream. Everyone hated it when “Dallas” did it, but it worked well when “Newhart” did it.
In any case, I enjoyed reading it. And thank you very much for entering.

good story by the way and @john perkins that couldn’t have been a more random reference if you had said, “Everyone hated it when “the many loves of Dobie Gillis” did it, but they loved it when “Parker louis can’t loose” did it. i like your style your the kind of writer/critic that will steal your style just to give you pressure. sorry i got carried away(martinis) i loved it

That was cool. Very Good Job, Fantasy.