There’s a quiet pacing throughout this piece that really matches the setting. Nicely done.

Being a history buff, I appreciated this vacation story very much ,vivid, can almost feel being there.

Note: scraping has one “p” and presence, not presents. :)

I’ve been to Valley Forge and Gettysburg, it reminds me of that field trip…..

Thanx Elsha, my grammer is usualy better than that.

omg I love this story.. It warms my heart that you chose to write about it. I will forever remember that day.. And treasure it forever in my heart. I still have those photos.. Thank you so much for writing this story. You immortalized this day. And I am glad that it was as special to you, as it was for me. :)

Have you been to Gettysburg before? It is creepy there. You can pratically see the people still fighting. Good explaination, I can picture the vacation.
LoA