That’s a funny twist. I was obviously expecting something else. A couple of typos in the first paragraph, though. It should read: _I thought you said you would be ‘relaxing’ on your day off today!â€?

I agree with tbs, that is one funny twist. Besides that typo he mentioned, there is another one in your last pgh, where you write “its a Bowflex,” it should read “it’s.”

I didn’t expect that, I thought she was ficleting!

LOL pyro, yeah we all ficlet in our sweat pants, topless. :)
I knew it wasn’t going to be something racy…

Definitely an interesting twist that I did not expect. Fun and somewhat humorous.
Thank you for entering.

@Elsha i am writing this comment poolside at a nudist camp but that isnt as racy as the visualo you just created. thanks oh yeah good story

Honestly, I didn’t think it was that aweful until I published it. Sorry if I offended anyone

i think its kind of cool this story.. you really have people believe, that she was cheating on him.. and as it turns out.. shes not. Its a humorous ironic twist.. Nothing to be ashamed of.. Forget the typos, we all make mistakes.. Nobody on here writes a perfect story without any errors of any kind.. Flaws are a good thing!

Hehe, I enjoyed the twist in the end. My mind was somewhere else entirely (In the gutter, maybe :-D )

LoA