Nice…can get the frustration. After dispatching the other guys in the diner last night, he’s not used to such an equal.

excellent action here

I really enjoyed writing the fight-scenes, but it’s been going on for quite a while now. Figured it was about time to move on. Besides, poor Benny’s taken a lot of punishment, and he’s still gotta find the chips! Mmm…doritos.

Above and beyond on the action scenes, the last paragraph is awesomely hectic.

Fantastic. And I love the title.