Ooh, I’m loving this so far. That last line gave me goosebumps.

Great scene, and a nice example of dramatic irony as well.

Well done building the suspense up along the way. I love the descriptions and the dialogue coming from the old lady. Very spooky.

Suspenseful and o boy a ghost..

Nice of great grandma to rise from the dead to lend a hand. Cold as it may be. But who could be chasing her?
Another excellent entry. Looking forward to see how this turns out.