Great pacing and dialogue in this one.

Pale horse? Biblical reference to death, I think? I wouldn’t expect War or Famine to show up in the cemetary…at least not directly. Starting to get very magical and large in scope…a good thing.

Yes, the pale horse represents death biblically. I wonder why it’s her time again?

I like the genealogical references. Six wives!? Geeze, I couldn’t even survive one…or she couldn’t survive me…………
Did I type that out loud?
Cool series going here, Jen!

It’s like the grim reaper is after her.. maybe she escaped him once..

Excellent. And yes, six wives is easily five too many.

I just had to toss in the six wives.. ;D I have been amazed to find the multiple marriages of long ago ancestors. Especially with the “new” talk of how divorce rates being up and so on. Many of the generations passed didn’t outlive spouses, they just grew bored, or, well, who knows, but they can be found on census transcripts just a few pages down. :D It can get really frustrating when the branches fork so often.