Anna if you keep nit picking people might think your in love. jenunique there is nothing more awesome than being carried away(accept an mlt mutton lettuce and tomato) the story was soooooo good, i wish i was a doctor moreau freak with four arms so i could give it for thumbs up.
Took me a few reads to make sense of it, but I was a bit distracted. Great description of the shift to incorporeal. I think what threw me was the quick twist from concerned ancestor to opportunistic witch.
Wow, like THX I wasn’t expecting that twist with the ancestor stealing her body like that. How interesting. Carried away is a good thing when you’re writing (your one of my favorites writers on the site).
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