Wow, awesome. She’s a great character, the interaction is solid with a couple hints of humor. Then you just casually and neatly throw in that he’s on the run, suggesting way more story than I was expecting. Just what a ficlet should be! LoA
I loved the line, “There was beer” as it gives us an insight into the character’s personality and sense of humor so early in the piece. Awesome ficlet!
I have to agree with Ana and THX , it was the cat’s pajamas (I’m not in the LoA, so I might not have authorization to use the word “Awesome”) I enjoyed the line “It was the sound of an old muscle car remembering what it had been made for.”
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