Ooohh. That actually gave me chills. Great setup and delivery. Well done.

Ooh, what a chilling ending. I think I’ll be staying out of such environments out of a greater fear than I had before. Great job at answering the challenge.

I had goosebumps after that ending. Great job writing such a scary story in so few words.

@between i usually try to avoid any environment where the floor is covered with bodies, where have you been hanging out, cambodia? lol good story

Ominous ending.

Indeed. What in the heck are they doing in here in the first place? Awesome entry.

Heck if I know what they were doing. It’s open for sequel or prequel if anyone can explain it away.