Where you write “under his breathe,” it should read breath.
This is a tense series you’ve got going here. It almost makes me uncomfortable to read it, but I feel compelled to to know what happens next. And the titles are suggestive and thought-provoking.

Jeremy is not only an ass, but he’s stupid as well. Not a good idea to piss off people whom you are asking for help.
And did that gun have a silencer? I would expect someone to come to his aid. Then again, not sure if I would.

I love that last paragraph/tirade against the 911 operator. This is so intense that you almost have to laugh to get threw it without feeling violated (in a good way).