Disturbing and chilling situation you’ve set up, and then an excellent twist on the challenge of ‘dead men tell tales’. Really inventive.

I agree with THX ’s comment. The closing paragraph really was an inventive way of working with ‘dead men tell tales’.

In your second to last paragraph, the phrase “there voices” should read “their voices.”
This was an excellent read. I loved especially the denial of the last two, refusing to accept that they’ve died. Awesome entry.

Yeah deffinately the creepiest tale. How yoy describe each of their demise and the setting.. esp the ending.

Very cool. Morbidly fun, and a cool twist on the challenge.