I humbly felt like this was something that needed to be in this series… please forgive me if it’s unworthy of your (THX’s) calibre.

Wouldn’t call it unworthy. Am I right in understanding this to suggest some sort of psychic bond between our two perpetrators? That would be an interesting avenue and would further explain Cole’s powers of persuation on both Gordo and the girls. Please, never hesitate to sequel my stuff! You actually did manage to fit the mood and feel, I thought.

I also thought you kept with the feel of the series. The psychic link is an interesting twist.

It’s more that Cole can do the mind stuff; the others just happen to be on the recieving end (unfortunately). But thank you for the kind words about fitting the tone of the series, I’m flattered.