Cool. Kept me guessing until the very last moment. There are a few minor grammar and spelling issues, but they didn’t detract from the overall story. I’ve always been a big fan of female assassins.
Thank you for entering.

This feels like a very young female assassin. The twist was cool.

Thanks!

I read it not knowing what to expect, and then again, now knowing what to expect, searching for clues, seeing them for what they really mean, not what I had guessed. Your story holds up to scrutiny and re-reading! It’s like a good movie you want to watch again to find something you missed!

Cool twist. I wasn’t expecting a young female assassin! I’m bummed now, though, because I had a similar idea I was going to use in the challenge and now I have to come up with something else. :(

Thanks, and sorry! I know how you feel though. After I wrote it I thought it might be a popular though so I read just about everything in the UTC frantically. :P

I thought it was great! Very cool ending. Throughout the whole story, I didn’t know what she was—so it took me by surprise.