Interesting third installment… One question, if Lynda picked up that he was hurting himself and his bride, couldn’t she also have picked up the intentions behind his test? In the last paragraph there’s a typo. “To make sure, we have created a test”

If the telepath is sufficiently advanced, maybe not. Thanks for pointing out the error. Corrected and nirvana regained.

OK, now that was a very good read – I loved the progression of colour, the twist in each ficlet and this extra meta-twist at the end.

Really a superb entry into the challenge.

LoA