Goki sounds a lot like Loki, and seems a similar sort of character. Very fun take on the prequel. I really like that this was how you read her ficlet, so you just continued it that way.
Goki is a funny name.. fun little read.. I think I should have read the one before this, so I could familiarize myself with the subject matter. As usual excellent dialog versus inner monolog. With a dash of narrative.
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