Ooh, I like the last line a lot. You built up a whole lot of foreboding during the last few posts, and now it’s overfilling with “uh-oh.”

that’s some shit-hot nano

I’m gonna agree with Jon. That last line really added something to this story. I’m thinking they built the Fruit Fucker 2000, but maybe that’s because I’ve been playing Penny Arcade Adventures: On The Rain-Slick Precipice of Darkness recently.
I also loved the line about them being a pile of “oozing, dead meat.”

I agree with the others. I wonder what was built and feel something foul is in the air besides the smell of that oozing, dead meat.