Cute and downright romantic scene of a contented sleep. You’re still playing about with the present and past tense thing though. Intentionally, or just slipping back and forth?

I still haven’t learned to not write when I am tired.. I guess I never know when to say no..

oh and you used progressed twice, next to each other, and it sounds redundant, nevertheless, I’m reading on as I have a lot to catch up on!!