how embarrassing .. Like the name Tisdale..very different.

i like it was it a ficlet nirvana?

Yes it was. I aim for ficlet nirvana every time, but I don’t always end up with one.

“This is what it sounds like when I die.” Heh. I personally would be tense like Wink and yet disappointed that that was what death was going to sound like.

This story was ficlet nirvana, in more ways than one. I love the alliteration in “cackling cruelly.” This is one of your best, tbs!

this story was just so nice i need tto comment again

the trials and tribulations of a teacher.. trying to live normally outside of school.. taunted by generations of misunderstood rebels..

After reading this story and its sequel I am just filled with dread. You know this guys going to explode and you’re going to end up covered in crap like the front row at a Gallagher show…

Wayne is like a shakey Icabod Crane..

Awesome sound effects!

Very funny!

Great job.

This could have taken a much darker turn but it didn’t, and I’m glad. Good job.
LoA