cool story.. sorry i don’t have any bobble heads to confer with.

So what we have on our hands is a real tough guy, a little bit cranky, but definitely a tough guy.

I’m likinig this alot !! Very fresh!
Nothing like a good “Oz” story! :)

Title alone needs a ‘mature’ tag, buddy. Let’s keep it PG for the kiddies.

“G white?” Never heard that. When I was in jail, us honkeys were referred to as “woods,” a shortened version of “peckerwoods.”
You’ve definitely got some flair when it comes to telling a story, but I think the writing itself needs to be cleaned up a little (cleaned up as in grammar and flow, not the cursing).

wow. Not what i expected, but I like it.

I’m a little confused about the last sentence, who does “he” refer to? Because it was written in first person so maybe its just a mistake.

Oh that was refering to the guy he had kicked in the face until passed out and then gave up his bunk. Which i know by experience is the only way to get a bunk in southside H.O.D in O.P.P. Where they keep the capitol offenders and escape artists.

Whoa with the title, Trifalmadorian. Even if you wrote shizznit, or some such variation, it would be better. I don’t want them making you pull it down because it’s a neat read otherwise.