i really like the end [:
very nice cassssssie.

The end is COOOL !!
I was waiting for a twist, and i wasn’t disappointed.

That’s what it feels like doesn’t it? When someone breaks your heart, soul and spirit all at once… Murder.

i have to agree with everyone else here! the end?? “leaving the murder site, because he just killed me.” GAH !! GREAT !!! it is SUCH a good comparison!

It is murder. That’s an apt description and wonderful take off the original inspiration, that haunting photograph.

wow sad :( i feel bad for that kid