Ah, that hurts. I think this is what they meant when they sang, “One is the loneliest number. Two can be as bad as one; it’s the loneliest number since the number one…“

That’s an awesome song, THX .
Brilliant job using a picture of boxes to inspire a piece on the difficulty of love. You can approach the box as a metaphor here in so many different ways…

I wrote a sequel, hope you don’t mind.

Not at all! Thank you very much :D

I agree. The box metaphor is brilliant. That’s a beautinful, moving peice. Great job!

Very well done. I think I know this guy. He listens to Tom Leykus and pops his collar.

I agree with everyone that this is an excellent story.. I also agree with the Box metaphor. Since there are several, each one could represent different things. .This story makes an emotional connection with the reader. It is a universal topic that everyone can relate to.. Bravo!!

At the back of my mind I was thinking “Is he married? Don’t do it!!” I can be so pessimistic sometimes…..
I think you have captured the frustration perfectly!

wow i really love this probably bc i know so many ppl who r like this [including me] and have 2 deal with the frustration and sometimes lies i guess but yeah i like this alot :]