Based on a song by Ronnie James Dio, called Invisible.
Story inspired by these lines:

“The only way, to really stay, is to walk right out the door,
“You can go away, You can Leave here,
“I can be invisible and go away.”

and:

“You never touch me you never feel me you’ll never see me again because I’ve just become unseen”

Nicely told. I loved the ending, leaving a bit of revenge destruction in her wake as she goes.

I love it! THX is right the revenge and carnage at the end was great. I loved the line: The explosion was glorious.

Great story, I have not heard the song that inspired it but I will go look it up. I love the fight she has with herself over the razor blade, very real.

i like this i need to hear the song

I am also not familiar with this song, but I love the internal conflict and the resolution at the end. Thanks for entering.

I don’t know the song, but this is wonderfully written. Great job.

Well with that swollen eye, no one will know who she is for a while…maybe long enough to become forgotten, thus invisible. Logically, it could work. Especially if the fire is deemed accidental. Loved the twist ending, from suicide, to mayhem.

I’ll just ditto tbs on this one. Great, wonderful job!