Nice use of the lyrics – they’re woven neatly into your tale. Radiohead rules!!! Ahem. Sorry, just had to get that out of my system.

I’m not aware of the song used here, but it’s still good. Thanks for entering

Kind of scary. There’s going to be some bloodshed. I like that in reading it you really can’t tell who’s the evil one and who’s right.

i don’t know the song.. but i looked up the lyrics and i have to say, the way you put them into the story was fantastic!

oh this is good radiohead is some muse huh?

Thanks to everyone for the lovely comments! :) Makes me glad to know that people enjoy my writing.

To Ana Cristina and Trifalmadorian_Mighty-Joe Young, I absolutely love Radiohead

I really enjoyed this ficlet, and am now listening to the song. I’ve always had a hard time understanding Thom Yorke, so I’ll have to look up the lyrics to really see how they’ve been woven into this. However, even without that, it’s still a wonderful piece.