I like the open-endedness of this. It could be a dream or nightmare. Or even worse, something terrible might have happened while she was sleeping. She should pinch herself to see.

Ooh, that is a bit worrisome. Nicely told at a measured pace until the final bit of ‘uh oh’.

I love this, it paints a picture in your head.

uh oh. that’s scary. I’m soo curious to know what happens next!!
great job, I agree with Twitch. It does paint a picture in your head.