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geez. this one might need to be marked mature. but i liked the detail anywayyy. i think you should have written more about the friends concern/crying to add more detail tho. its good anyway. :)

hmm.. I thot I already marked it mature… I will now… thnx for reminding me or I nvr woulda noticed…

I don’t think 5 skinny kids will be able to hurt a big angry man…..