Great buildup of ominous atmosphere!

Yes, I particularly like the ambience….rather spooky.

Wonderful!

wow….a great sequel. i loved the simile about the moon in the first paragraph. spooky, yes…creepy. but i mean that in a good way. like, i wish i could write stuff that created a picture like that. :]

Actually, emmaJ234, “Rain” was the original; “Omens” was a prequel, written after the fact.

Beautiful. In a spine tingley sort of way. conjures up incredible mental images.