I really like this, especially
“The sun itself a cliché so it hides
Behind buildings and mountains and afternoon tides.” That line is very memorable.

Lovely. You have music to go with that? Sounds like it’d work as rock or alterna-punk maybe. Not enough dogs or alcohol mentioned to be a country song.

Thanks guys! I don’t have music to go with it yet, I guess I kinda do that whole process backwards. Spot on with the rock/alternative/punk mention though.
Thanks again!