Well, I think you rocked this challenge. I want to know what was in the file and why it was important enough for him to kill the girl and keep it from Slone. For that matter I want to know who Slone is and who George is really working with. Great job of setting up all kinds of intrigue.

Great Ficlet John. I loved the writing style and the pace… very well done.

I just have to share that I love the name Sloan. It’s such a cool name for a character. Great pacing in this.

Pacing here is flawless, John. Love how matter-of-fact the style is.