That last line was pretty funny. Cute little continuation to a completely random bit of ficleting. And thank you for heeding my advice. Do you agree that it reads better?
I do have to ask though, how did you find this 14 day old ficlet? Usually once a fic has his 24 hours and not made it to the most active list, it’s bound to obscurity.

It definetly does read better. And it’s funny you should ask how I found it. People have told me I’m funny and I love writing comical stories and articles so I just searched for a ficlet with “comedy” as a tag and this is what I found. I wanted to show that I don’t just do haunted houses, scary mermaids, and murder mysteries, you know?

Great job on sequeling!

And that is very strange that you should find it after 14 days…

Ah well, perhaps twas fate!

Good job, anyways.

You know, I thing that sounds like fun, bringing stories back from the dead. I might have to try that more often.