The last two lines were breath-taking.

Creepy. Awesome twist though. I’m now beginning to wonder if she really is insane. Very cool entry.
One note though. You seem to be missing a pronoun in this phrase: “as though were talking.”

With that last line about killing the man she loved in the first (last) entry, finding out it’s her father here is kinda creepy, but I’m willing to read on since… well, since that’s really messed up.

wow, i really didn’t see that one coming