Ana, everytime you write something, it makes me want to read more and more. Great job on this. Its such a sad, sad story though.

This is the problem with challenges. I post something I think is ok, then I read stuff like this and am ashamed, ashamed, of my effort.
Another fantastic piece that, as Freedom mentioned, requires me to read on.

My words were short, precise as knives. Fantastic line. This is top-notch a phenomenal backward-series-answer to the challenge that I was too afraid to even try. Your level of awesomeness is ridiculously high!

I definatly agree with Freedom =]