I still don’t know exactly why she’s so against her dad, though I can imagine a circumstance or two that would be pretty bad. Loved the line: I felt for the gun in my jacket, needing to touch its cold steel surface for reassurance. Really puts the reader into her mind. I also enjoyed the detail about lying being easier…

Shows how disturbed your character is by her nonchalance to the news of her mother’s passing. Twisted. I wonder what made her so messed up. I guess I’ll just have to keep reading.

But just because one half of the equation was missing didn’t mean this problem couldn’t be solved.

Fantastic line, in a series chock-full of fantastic lines. A+++

I want to know what happened to her mom!