I love that she had to become a pathological liar to accomplish her plan. That makes the detail lying becoming so easy in the previous ficlet make that much more sense. And buying the gun first off really tells you how serious she is about getting revenge.
Deeply twisted. I loved the image of her letting the words fall to the floor. Very well done. And you’ve kept us yearning for an answer to what set her off originally. Simply a superb effort so far.
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