Kind of cheesy, naming the guy Havoc and everything, I know, but I wanted to enter so… here we are.

Your story is well written, well formatted and the dialogue reads well.

But the twist confuses me a bit: How does the chief know that agent #0 is a double agent?

LoA

Well, he calls him a liar because he’s supposedly been hunting him down. But he’s dead. I need to edit it.

I’m with Ridcully here, somewhat confused by the twist. Are Havoc and #0 the same person?
Thank you for entering.