I had a hint that something like that would happen at the end, especially with the line, “It warmed him and chilled him at the end.” But it was still a fantastic twist. Well done!

What a beastly thing to have happen! I suppose an amnesiac isn’t the same person for a while, but to use that to get out of a relationship is just brutal!

That was quite a cool twist. I like the sisterly kiss and all.

oh they would have to die.

Wow, a very chilling thing for the to do to the poor amnesiac. But what a great twist.

Wow, that was messed up. Not sure why I missed this one earlier. Good twist.
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