No kid could possibly resist looking. Well done. Though you’ve got a couple little typos in there. The one that bothers me most is “wrapped.” He should “rap” his cane on the building. It would be one very long and bendy cane to “wrap” the building. =P
Thanks john i asked my mother about it (lit proffesor) and she replied, are you serious? Don’t make me hurt you? so i just guessed and like vissini i guessed wrong.
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