Wow.. this is my favorite story in this series. I like how Becca laid it out on the line. She really let Sassy know the truth. Honesty is a difficult tricky thing. Sometimes you don’t want to be honest because it can potentally be painful. Good work with this story.. The face off was realistic and believable. Plus Karl was there for comedic effect. he was like the counter balance.. he gave the story some humor.. Bravo!!

Quite the climactic scene here, TBS .
Finally, Sassy gets her comeuppance. (And I know Karl’s been creepy and all, but I do kinda feel sorry for him. Sassy, no, but a little itty bitty bit for our magician).
I’ll sequel when my head doesn’t feel like an inflated balloon and I’ve regained the use of my lungs.

@ana Hey i love that line little people always get thier cumeuppance from my fair lady, and how did you know how to spell cumeuppance.

I also feel for creepy Karl… I wonder if he’ll bounce right back. I imagine it takes a lot to keep a good magician down.

@Trafalmadorian, spell-check is a marvelous thing. I love that word, too. :p

You’ve got sequel!

Yes, that was a very climactic scene. I loved Karl was floored by her words, literally.
haha, very funny.
LoA

Rough scene. I think you did a great job capturing all of the different emotions flying around in this one.